tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5970569328265348295.post1772255073386424353..comments2023-09-08T03:58:05.432-07:00Comments on Magdalena Ball: Poetry Monday: Luke DaviesMagdalena Ballhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00182314078304734996noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5970569328265348295.post-52428451245800630212012-02-13T06:24:02.195-08:002012-02-13T06:24:02.195-08:00Not sure...the second section sings to me but stil...Not sure...the second section sings to me but still thinking through the first and third...the double "was" and use of "thing" upset my expectations at the start. Pondering the last couple of lines too...Anne Duguid Knolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10332742931248440319noreply@blogger.com